If I were an employer...
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In my case, if I were an employer, I prefer to hire an experienced worker.
Of course, I have to give the more salary.
But they accept new skills and new things easily.
So if I hired an inexperienced worker,
I could teach them long time.
But workers who have experiences are taught for a short time.
I think it is more economical.
강사 첨삭
Happy Friday [이름],
Thank you for taking your time in doing your homework.
I hope you can become an employer one day and running your own business.
See you later!
-- T. Giselle ^^
In my case, if I were an employer, I prefer to hire an experienced worker.>> Correct.Of course, I have to give the more salary.>> Of course, I have to give more salary.
>> OR: I have to give a higher salary.But they accept new skills and new things easily.>> Correct.So if I hired an inexperienced worker, I could teach them long time.>> So if I hire an inexperienced worker, I have to teach him/her for a long time. But workers who have experiences are taught for a short time. >> Correct. I think it is more economical.
>> Correct.
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