If I were given a week off
학생이 쓴 원문
It\'s a real dream in the current situation like Corona outbreak.
If I were given a week off, I would like to visit Switzerland.
I really want to go to places where I can see great natural scenery like Switzerland, New Zealand and Austria.
It would be nice if I was alone.
I love my family so much, but sometimes I want to travel alone.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! This was a great essay although I need you to focus more on you sentence construction and usage of your punctuations marks. Keep up the good work. :)
-Teacher Elise
If I were given a week off, I would like to visit Switzerland.
>> If I were given a week off, I would like to visit Switzerland.
It\'s a real dream in the current situation like Corona outbreak.
>>It\'s a dream in the current situation like the Corona Outbreak.
I really want to go to places where I can see great natural scenery like Switzerland, New Zealand and Austria.
>>I really want to go to places where I can see great natural sceneries like Switzerland, New Zealand and Australia.
It would be nice if I was alone.
>>It would be nice if I could go alone.
I love my family so much, but sometimes I want to travel alone.
>>I love my family so much but sometimes I want to travel alone and have some \"me\" time.
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