If I were going to camping for a weekend, I will bring some utensil for cook and tent.

2019-02-28 · 첨삭 강사 Rosie

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I had had a camping when I was in middle school with my teacher. It was fun time during those days as I think. It is too hard for me to go to camping these days. Because it takes a more effort than I was in school days. If the opportunity came, I want to travel to rural area to see night sky for observing the star. Thanks for reading. Bye.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Wee!

Thanks so much for doing your homework ^^

I hope you are having a great night ☺


I had had a camping when I was in middle school with my teacher.

>> I went on a camping when I was in middle school.


It was fun time during those days as I think.

>> It was a fun time.


It is too hard for me to go to camping these days.
Because it takes a more effort than I was in school days.

>> It\'s too hard for me to go camping these days because it takes more effort


If the opportunity came, I want to travel to rural area to see night sky for observing the star.

>> If opportunity comes, I would want to travel to rural areas to see the night sky and take a look at the stars.


Thanks for reading.
Bye.

>> CORRECT

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