If I were going to camping for a weekend, I will bring some utensil for cook and tent.
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I had had a camping when I was in middle school with my teacher.
>> I went on a camping when I was in middle school.
It was fun time during those days as I think.
>> It was a fun time.
It is too hard for me to go to camping these days.
Because it takes a more effort than I was in school days.
>> It\'s too hard for me to go camping these days because it takes more effort
If the opportunity came, I want to travel to rural area to see night sky for observing the star.
>> If opportunity comes, I would want to travel to rural areas to see the night sky and take a look at the stars.
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>> CORRECT
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