If I were offered an excellent job opportunity aboard, would I consider leaving my family for an ind
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My answer is crystal clear. I will not to consider leaving my family.
The Purpose of living is not to have a good job and lots of money. Good job and money is one of impotent means to live my life with family. Priority never can be reversed.
However, if I can go with family or if I leave for few years, an excellent job offer will be considerable. I think that giving the opportunity living aboard to kids might be good chance to widen their view points. As you know, well-balanced experience such as relationship with families, friends and locational circumstance in an adolescent become a foundation how to see the world the rest of life.
So, I would not give up the time with kids.
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Hello [이름]! :)
The Purpose of living is not to have a good job and lots of money.
However, if I can go with family or if I leave for few years, an excellent job offer will be considerable.
So, I would not give up the time with kids.
Thank you so much for answering your homework.
Have a wonderful day. :)
- Tricia
My answer is crystal clear. I will not to consider leaving my family.
>> My answer is crystal clear. I will not consider leaving my family.
The Purpose of living is not to have a good job and lots of money.
>> The purpose of living is not to have a good job and lots of money.
Good job and money is one of impotent means to live my life with family.
>> Having a good job and a lot of money is one of the important means to live life with my family.
Priority never can be reversed.
>> My priority can never be reversed.
However, if I can go with family or if I leave for few years, an excellent job offer will be considerable.
>> However, if I can go with my family or if I will leave for few years for an excellent job offer it can be considerable.
I think that giving the opportunity living aboard to kids might be good chance to widen their view points.
>> I think that given the opportunity to live aboard with my kids might be a good chance to widen their view points in life.
As you know, well-balanced experience such as relationship with families, friends and locational circumstance in an adolescent become a foundation how to see the world the rest of life.
>> As you know, a well-balanced life like having a good relationship with families, friends and the location or the environment are great factors for the foundation of adolescence, which will mold the children\'s perception about the world for the rest of their lives.
So, I would not give up the time with kids.
>> So, I would not give up my time with my kids.
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