If I were to choose between radio and television, I would choose _____, because ______.

2015-11-16 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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If i take one of the two, i would choose radio. There are three following reason for this. First of all, Radio is available in everywhere and everytime. When i go to school or using public transportation, i can enjoy music and story through the radio. Second, it is very meaningful for me to take some peaceful and personal time, which means whenever i go through the hard time, i can releve my stress and organize one's thoughts. I can send a stroy that is problems or worries about me to radio progra Third, listening to radio is more attractive and concentrative better than televison. While watiching the TV have auditory and visual characteristic, radio is only concentrate on listening. Closing the eyes and focusing on auditory during listening the radio is refreshing and a totally new experience.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework. Well done here! Please take note of the proper capitalization and double check your writing for typographical and spelling errors. ^^ Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ If i take one of the two, i would choose radio. >> If I could only use one out of the two, I would choose the radio. There are three following reason for this. >> There are three reasons for this. First of all, Radio is available in everywhere and everytime. >> First of all, the radio is available anytime, anywhere. When i go to school or using public transportation, i can enjoy music and story through the radio. >> When I go to school or when I use the public transportation, I can enjoy music and some stories through the radio. Second, it is very meaningful for me to take some peaceful and personal time, which means whenever i go through the hard time, i can releve my stress and organize one\'s thoughts. >> Second, it is very meaningful for me to have some peaceful and personal time, which means whenever I go through a hard time, I can relieve my stress and organize my thoughts. I can send a stroy that is problems or worries about me to radio progra >> I can send a story about my problems and worries to a radio program.Third, listening to radio is more attractive and concentrative better than televison. >> Third, listening to the radio is more attractive and it helps us concentrate better. While watiching the TV have auditory and visual characteristic, radio is only concentrate on listening. >> While watching TV needs auditory and visual skills, the radio only focuses on our listening skills. Closing the eyes and focusing on auditory during listening the radio is refreshing and a totally new experience. >> Closing our eyes and focusing on the audio while listening to the radio is a refreshing and new experience.  

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