If I will born again.
학생이 쓴 원문
I would like to born to be Freddie Mercury, a vocal of Queen.
Because He had has a beautiful voice and like he, I want to write so many emotive and helpful song for people.
If I will sing a song In front of so many audience, that is very wonderful memory to me.
I love his song and voice.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for doing your homework. ^^
Because He had has a beautiful voice and like he, I want to write so many emotive and helpful song for people.
>>Because he has a beautiful voice and like him,. I want to write so many emotional and helpful song for people.
If I will sing a song In front of so many audience, that is very wonderful memory to me.
>>If I will sing a song in front of an audience, that will be a very wonderful memory for me.
I love his song and voice.
I would like to born to be Freddie Mercury, a vocal of Queen.
>>CORRECT
>>Because he has a beautiful voice and like him,. I want to write so many emotional and helpful song for people.
If I will sing a song In front of so many audience, that is very wonderful memory to me.
>>If I will sing a song in front of an audience, that will be a very wonderful memory for me.
I love his song and voice.
>>CORRECT
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