If I will go America
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If I will go to the america, I will meet my cousin.
My big aunt family they are live in America.
My cousin sister and I so close, but we are live at so far and then we can\'t see each other often.
We have video call twice of month.
I really really miss my big aunt and cousin.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ann:)
Don\'t worry about it. When you become a performer in Broadway, you can see them as often as you like. Work hard so that all your dreams can become a reality. :)
If I will go to the america, I will meet my cousin.
My big aunt family they are live in America.
My cousin sister and I so close, but we are live at so far and then we can\'t see each other often.
We have video call twice of month.
I really really miss my big aunt and cousin.
>> If I will go to the America, I will meet with my cousin.
My big aunt family they are live in America.
>> My aunt\'s family lives in America.
My cousin sister and I so close, but we are live at so far and then we can\'t see each other often.
>> My cousins and I are very close but they live so far away so we can\'t see each other very often.
We have video call twice of month.
>> We video call each other twice a month.
I really really miss my big aunt and cousin.
>> I really miss my aunt and cousins.
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