If I will visit your city, what restaurant would you recommend to me and why?

2021-09-09 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I want to recommend you ‘ mara holic’, because it\'s the best Maratang restaurant for me. And I also recommend ‘hanam pig’. Because it is a restaurant that sell delicious pork like Grilled Pork Belly. Finally, I recommend you ‘Gongcha’. Because it is a cafe that famous in Korea.

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Hi [이름]! ^^

OMG! Gongcha is actually my favorite milk tea shop here in the Philippines. I go there once a week. Hahahaha!

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I want to recommend you ‘ mara holic’, because it\'s the best Maratang restaurant for me.

>> I want to recommend you the restaurant \"mara holic\" because it\'s the best Maratang restaurant for me.

And I also recommend ‘hanam pig’. Because it is a restaurant that sell delicious pork like Grilled Pork Belly.

>> And I would also like to recommend \"Hanam pig\" because it is a restaurant that sell delicious pork like grilled pork belly.

Finally, I recommend you ‘Gongcha’. Because it is a cafe that famous in Korea.

>> Finally, I recommend you \"Gongcha because it is a famous café in South Korea.

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