If I will visit your city, what restaurant would you recommend to me and why?

2021-09-09 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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If you will visit my city or travel my city, I want to recommend to you a lot of restaurants in front of my school. In front of my school, there are many low buildings and there are planty of Korean food restaunrants. And as a Korean, I think the resaurant\'s foods are really great so I wnat to recommend to you the restuarants.

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Hi [이름]! ^^

That sounds good. Thanks for the recommendation! :)

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If you will visit my city or travel my city, I want to recommend to you a lot of restaurants in front of my school.

>> If you will visit my city, I want to recommend to you a lot of restaurants in front of my school.

In front of my school, there are many low buildings and there are planty of Korean food restaunrants.

>> In front of my school, there are many small buildings and there are plenty of Korean food restaurants.

And as a Korean, I think the resaurant\'s foods are really great so I wnat to recommend to you the restuarants

>>And as a Korean, I think the food there are really good so I want to recommend it to you.

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