If I will visit your country, what food will you cook for me and Why?

First, thank you cam teracher. I like your voice. Because, Your voice is very sweet. My Homework If I will visit your country, what food will you cook for me and Why? If you will vist my country, I will cook bulgogi for you. Because, I think, My cuntry have many traditional Korean food. But, It is not to foreigner's taste. So, I will cook bulgogi for main course. And then, I will cook Kimchi pancakes and bibibap The kimche is traditional korean food and the bibibap can taste many flavors. Therefore, I will cook bulgogi, bibibap, Kimchi pancakes. Also, For dessert, I will have Baramtteok. Actually, Foreigner do not like tteok. But, Baqramtteok is very delicious. It tastes like cakes. So, I commend it.

Hi there Miss [이름]!^_^        First, I would like to thank you for your generous and wonderful comment about my voice.^_^ Your voice is sweet too, just so you know. Second, I am so touched because you said that you will cook many traditional foods when I go to Korea. I was actually drooling while reading your composition. The foods that you will cook for me are delicious. Don\'t worry because whatever you serve infront of me, I will really appreciate it. We will talk more about this later in class. See you! ---xoxoTeacher Cam--^^   Here are my corrections for you:   First, thank you cam teracher. >>>First, I would like to thank you Teacher Cam. I like your voice. Because, Your voice is very sweet. >>>I like your voice because it is very sweet.^_^If you will vist my country, I will cook bulgogi for you.>>>If you will visit my country, I will cook bulgogi for you. >>>I will cook Bulgogi for you when you\'ll come and visit Korea. Because, I think, My cuntry have many traditional Korean food.>>>Because I think my country has many traditional foods. >>>Because Korea has many traditional foods. But, It is not to foreigner\'s taste.>>>But to foreigners, they do not find our traditional foods tasteful. >>>Some foreigner people don\'t find our traditional foods to be delicious. So, I will cook bulgogi for main course.>>>So I will cook bulgogi as the main course. >>>The main course will be bulgogi. And then, I will cook Kimchi pancakes and bibibap>>>Also, I will cook kimchi, pancakes, and bibibap. >>>I will prepare kimchi, pancakes, and bibibap as side dishes too. The kimche is traditional korean food and the bibibap can taste many flavors. >>>The kimchi is a traditional Korean food while the bibibap can be cooked with many flavors.Therefore, I will cook bulgogi, bibibap, Kimchi pancakes.>>>Therefir, I will cook bulgogi, bibibap, kimchi, and pancakes. Also, For dessert, I will have Baramtteok.>>>Also, the dessert would be baqramtteok. Actually, Foreigner do not like tteok. >>>Actually, foreigners do not like tteok.But, Baqramtteok is very delicious. It tastes like cakes.>>>But baqramtteok is very delicious. It tastes like cakes. So, I commend it. >>>So I am confident to tell you that this food is one of best traditional foods.