If I won a lot of money, I will return the money to the original owner.

2019-05-30 · 첨삭 강사 Rosie

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Though it is free to get it or abandon it, I will return it to the original state. I have never been to those of situations. On the contrary I have been lost some money once upon a time. Money enables one to do a lot of things. Thanks to money I can do a many useful things like studying and playing and so on. Thanks for reading. Bye.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Wee!

Thanks for doing your homework ^^

I hope you are having a great night ☺

Though it is free to get it or abandon it, I will return it to the original state.
>> Though it is free to get it or abandon it, I will return it.

I have never been to those of situations.
>> I have never experienced that.

On the contrary I have been lost some money once upon a time.
>> On the contrary, I have lost some money.

Money enables one to do a lot of things.
>> CORRECT

Thanks to money I can do a many useful things like studying and playing and so on.
>> Thanks to money, I can do a lot of things like studying, playing, and so on.

Thanks for reading.
Bye.

>> CORRECT

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