If I won a million dollars!
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After I became a adult, I buy lotteries sometimes.
>> I started buying lottery tickets when I became an adult.
But I think that I\'m not a lucky person because I\'ve never won.
>> I do think that I\'m unlucky because I have never won.
Nevertheless, if I won a million dollars, I will buy a building.
>> Nevertheless, if I win a million dollars, I will buy a building.
And I will never tell that.
>> I will never tell others of this fact.
Then, I will donate money and go on a travel with my family.
>> Then, I will donate my money and go travelling with my family.
Also, I will buy presents for my family, friends and poor people.
>> I will buy presents for my family, friends and poor people.
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