if icould live anywhere else in the world, where would i live ? why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I sometimes think, when iam old. I want to live the philippines during the winter of the korean. Because, winter of the korean is very cold.
I don,t like cold. And I have never been to the philippines . I think , when i am young, i can go contry far away. But when i am old ,i can't go country far away. So i have been country far away america.spain.portugal. france, germany... but it"s near. i have been to the china.japan. i"m going to go new zealand september 18th. so and then we can't see during 2weeks. i don't know yet, the country what iwant to live.
강사 첨삭
Hello! ^^
I do appreciate you sending your answer to me. Your answers were very good but we need to correct some of your grammars and sentence structures. I do hope that you do not take these corrections as an offense but take these corrections as an opportunity for you to improve your English more
~~ Teacher Kathy
Here are my corrections for you:
>> Sometimes I think I want to live in the Philippines when I get older, especially during winter season in Korea.
Because, winter of the korean is very cold. I don,t like cold. And I have never been to the philippines .
>> It\'s very cold, and I don\'t like cold weather and I have never been to the Philippines.
I think , when i am young, i can go contry far away. But when i am old ,i can\'t go country far away.
>> I used to think that I can always travel to far places, but now that I\'m old, I can\'t seem to travel far anymore.
So i have been country far away america.spain.portugal. france, germany... but it\"s near. i have been to the china.japan.
>> I traveled so many countries such as America, Spain, Portugal, France, Germany, Japan and China but I don\'t think that\'s far enough.
i\"m going to go new zealand september 18th. so and then we can\'t see during 2 weeks.
>> My next destination is New Zealand and my flight is on September 18. I will stay there for 2 months, so we won\'t see each other for a while.
i don\'t know yet, the country what i want to live.
>> At the moment, I\'m not yet sure which country I want to live.
>> Now, I\'m not yet sure where I want to live.
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