If Korea getting together
학생이 쓴 원문
North Korea and South Korea is still war.
Just having rest time.
If North Korea and South Korea belong together, the first thing government need to solve is a separate family live together again.
When I was a student, teacher show us to the movie title is <국제시장> at class.
I saw a movie\'s one scene is a separate family meeting scene.
It\'s feel like so cruel, and just sad.
It\'s ridiculous to say goodbye to family.
And if our country getting together, I think we should resolve that problem first.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ann:)
I also hope that North Korea and South Korea would unite as well. Although, I think there would also be disadvantages to this.
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North Korea and South Korea is still war.
>> North Korea and South Korea are still at war.
>> North Korea and South Korea are still at war.
Just having rest time.
>> They are just on rest.
If North Korea and South Korea belong together, the first thing government need to solve is a separate family live together again.
>> If the two countries will unite, the first thing that the government should do is to r[이름]ite separated families.
When I was a student, teacher show us to the movie title is <국제시장> at class.
>> When I was a student, teacher showed us a movie called \"국제시장\"
I saw a movie\'s one scene is a separate family meeting scene.
>> One scene in the movie involved separating a family.
It\'s feel like so cruel, and just sad.
>> It was so cruel and sad.
It\'s ridiculous to say goodbye to family.
>> It\'s ridiculous to say goodbye to your family.
And if our country getting together, I think we should resolve that problem first.
>> And if our country r[이름]ites again, I think we should resolve that problem first.
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