If love was a person, who would it be?
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HELLO SIMBA! THANK YOU FOR ALWAYS ALLOWING ME TO THINK ABOUT THESE THINGS IN A DIFFERENT PERSPECTIVE.
YOU GAVE GREAT IDEAS & OPINIONS. I AGREE WITH YOU! ^^ SALAMAT!
Itis very difficult question for me to answewr, because this question reminds me of many people.
>>It is a very difficult question for me to answer, because this question reminds me of so many people.
I think of some of man/woman in biographies of great person and the people who have been helping the others who are very poor and powerless first.
>>I think of some of men/women and biographies of great people.
And these people who have been helping the others who are very poor and powerless.
For example, Jose Rizal in Philipphines who has been called \"The father of independence\"
>>For example, Jose Rizal whose from the Philippines and named \"The Father of Independence.\"
Anne Sullivan who was the tutor of Helen Keller and so on.
>>OR Anne Sullivan who mentored Helen Keller and other people like them.
We have a lot to learn from people above.
>>We have a lot to learn from people like them.
Salamat^&^
>>Salamat!
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