If magic were real, should it be regulated by the government, or is it a fundamental human?
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If magic were real it should be regulated by the government. Because it\'s not easy to control the person with magic if they resist with their power. But there will be many advantages if it is used well.
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Jean~~
If magic were real, should it be regulated by the government, or is it a fundamental human?
If magic were real it should be regulated by the government. Because it\'s not easy to control the person with magic if they resist with their power.
>>> If magic were real, it should be regulated by the government because it would not be easy to control people with magic if they resisted using their powers.
>>> OR: If magic were real, I think the government should regulate it. It would be hard to control people misusing their powers, but it could also be really helpful if used well.
But there will be many advantages if it is used well.
>>> However, there would also be many advantages if magic were used wisely.
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