If magic were real, would it be a \"great equalizer\" or a tool that increases social inequality?
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I believe that the magic will worsen social inequality instead of fixing it. It would act as a divider rather than a great equalizer. The only way to prevent this is through heavy regulation by a very fair society.
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If magic were real, would it be a \\\"great equalizer\\\" or a tool that increases social inequality?
I believe that the magic will worsen social inequality instead of fixing it.
>>> OR: I believe magic would worsen social inequality rather than fix it.
>>> OR: Far from being a great equalizer, magic would intensify social divides.
It would act as a divider rather than a great equalizer.
>>> OR: It would serve as a divider, not a great equalizer.
The only way to prevent this is through heavy regulation by a very fair society.
>>> OR: The only way to prevent this would be strict regulation by a just and equitable society.
>>> OR: Only rigorous regulation by a truly just society could prevent this.
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