If possible, I want to learn English according to the teacher\'s guide

2022-11-02 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

학생이 쓴 원문

Homework - Studying English is a pleasure for me. But if there is something difficult for me to learn English, I no longer have difficulty memorizing new words. It\'s a joke, but I guess it\'s because I\'m older. And the sad thing about studying is that there is no rapid progress. I\'m probably in a hurry. Suggestion- In one part of the class, I want to learn English according to the teacher\'s guide, focusing on the textbooks set during the study time. If possible, I will study in advance of class. And I think it would be good to pre-talk the other parts comfortably. Prayer- God, I pray that you will help me study English well and that it will be used for the glory of God in the future. I pray in Jesus name. amen

강사 첨삭

Hey, Elliot. I hope you are having a good day. Thank you for checking the feedback page and for sharing your thoughts on the homework part. You did well and I hope to be part of your progress as you keep learning English for the glory of God and by His grace. See you in our next class. ~Jane c\", 


Homework - 
Studying English is a pleasure for me. 
>> CORRECT =) 

But if there is something difficult for me to learn English, I no longer have difficulty memorizing new words. 
>> But if there is something difficult for me in learning English, I no longer have difficulty memorizing new words. 

It\'s a joke, but I guess it\'s because I\'m older. 
>> CORRECT =)

And the sad thing about studying is that there is no rapid progress. 
>> CORRECT =) 

I\'m probably in a hurry.
>> CORRECT =) 

Suggestion -
In one part of the class, I want to learn English according to the teacher\'s guide, focusing on the textbooks set during the study time. 
>> In one part of the class, I want to learn English according to the teacher\'s guide, focusing on the textbooks set during class time. 

If possible, I will study in advance of class. 
>> If possible, I will study in advance of the class. 

And I think it would be good to pre-talk the other parts comfortably. 
>> CORRECT =) 

Prayer- 
God, I pray that you will help me study English well and that it will be used for the glory of God in the future. I pray in Jesus name. amen 
>> God, I pray that you will help me study English well and that it will be used for the glory of God in the future. I pray in Jesus\' name. Amen. 

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