If selected for this position, can you describe your strategy for the first 90 days?
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In the first 90 days, I would be adjusting myself to the new industry and customer base. First, I would be shifting my career from the HR consulting industry to the financial service industry. Secondly, I would be engaging with a new client base with different cultural backgrounds and specialties. From previous experience, I worked closely with APAC clients, but now with European clients. Alongside this, I usually worked with HR professionals, but I would be working closely with corporate strategy, finance, and policy professionals regarding energy transformation at your firm. Different industries and customer bases would be a challenge to me. My major strength is that I am agile in adapting to new atmospheres. As an international finance major with no experience in HR, I exceeded expectations by increasing revenue by 50%. Being open-minded to proceed with a constant learning curve allowed me to achieve this objective, and I believe that I could contribute my traits to your company.
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Thank you for this Aciel! Keep them coming.
In the first 90 days, I would be adjusting myself to the new industry and customer base.
In the first 90 days, I would be adjusting myself to the new industry and customer base.
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>>> OR: Within the first 90 days, I would be adjusting myself to the new industry and customer base.
First, I would be shifting my career from the HR consulting industry to the financial service industry.
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Secondly, I would be engaging with a new client base with different cultural backgrounds and specialties.
>>> OR: Secondly, I would be engaging with a new client base of different cultural backgrounds and specialties.
>>> OR: Secondly, I would be engaging in a new client base with different cultural backgrounds and specialties.
From previous experience, I worked closely with APAC clients, but now with European clients.
>>> OR: From my previous experience, I have worked closely with APAC clients, but now with European clients.
Alongside this, I usually worked with HR professionals, but I would be working closely with corporate strategy, finance, and policy professionals regarding energy transformation at your firm.
>>> correct
Different industries and customer bases would be a challenge to me.
>>> correct
My major strength is that I am agile in adapting to new atmospheres.
>>> correct
>>> OR: My major strength is that I am agile in adapting to a new atmosphere.
As an international finance major with no experience in HR, I exceeded expectations by increasing revenue by 50%.
>>> correct
Being open-minded to proceed with a constant learning curve allowed me to achieve this objective, and I believe that I could contribute my traits to your company.
>>> correct
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