If smoking suddenly banned,…
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If smoking suddenly banned, the world would become more devastated and more criminals. Withdrawal symptoms can be severe and harm people, and like drugs, cigarettes can be illegally trafficked. And I don\'t think cigarettes will go away forever. Cigarettes are expensive and unhealthy, but demand is very high. The number of people looking for cigarettes forever will increase.
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If smoking suddenly banned, the world would become more devastated and more criminals.
>>> If smoking were suddenly banned, the world would become more devastated and more criminals.
Withdrawal symptoms can be severe and harm people, and like drugs, cigarettes can be illegally trafficked. And I don\'t think cigarettes will go away forever.
>>> CORRECT!
Cigarettes are expensive and unhealthy, but demand is very high.
>>> CORRECT!
The number of people looking for cigarettes forever will increase.
>>> CORRECT!
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