If someone around you is feeling sad, how would you help them snap out of it, or would you just give
학생이 쓴 원문
That\'s a difficult question.
If someone around me is feeling sad, I think I will just give them space and stay with them.
Because if someone around me is feeling sad, it will be natural to comfort you, but I don\'t think I can say it easily the words of consolation I said may be different to those around me. In that case, I think it would be good to just provide space and spend some time together and remind you that there is someone around to ask for help at any time.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Thank you for your answer. I really liked your idea about giving someone space while still being there for them- it shows a lot of care and understanding. ^^
I made some corrections to help your sentences sound more natural and clearer too. ^^
~ Teacher Gina
~ Teacher Gina
That\'s a difficult question.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: That’s a tough question.
If someone around me is feeling sad, I think I will just give them space and stay with them.
>> If someone around me is feeling sad, I would give them space while still being there for them.
Because if someone around me is feeling sad, it will be natural to comfort you, but I don\'t think I can say it easily the words of consolation I said may be different to those around me.
>> Because when someone around me is feeling sad, it is natural to want to comfort them, but I don’t think I can easily find the right words, and my words of consolation may be different from what they need.
In that case, I think it would be good to just provide space and spend some time together and remind you that there is someone around to ask for help at any time.
>> In that case, I think it would be better to give them space, spend some time with them, and remind them that there is someone they can ask for help at any time.
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