if someone gave you flowers and chocolate today, how would you respond?
학생이 쓴 원문
I appreciate to give me them but it’s a little different to respond according to each type of people.
For example, if girl friend give me them, I will feel the most happiest and gladdest.
and then I will get a lot of stress to prepare the gift during a month because of the white day.
If just friends give me them, I will be happy and glad and I will pay for a cost if we have time to eat something or drink alcohol.
If someone is co-worker, I will say to her “thank you” and then I will give her candy on white day.
Anyway, I didn’t get anything to anybody therefore it’s the most important that I don\'t pay for buying something.
hahaha.. ^^;
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]!
Thank you for sending in your ideas~
I hope you get a lot of flowers and chocolate next year.
Have a nice day~
I appreciate to give me them but it’s a little different to respond according to each type of people.
>>I will appreciate that they gave me those things but I will respond differently to other types of people.
For example, if girl friend give me them, I will feel the most happiest and gladdest.
>>For example, if a girl who is my friend will give them, I will feel very glad.
and then I will get a lot of stress to prepare the gift during a month because of the white day.
>> Then I will be stressed a lot since I have to prepare a gift during white day.
If just friends give me them, I will be happy and glad and I will pay for a cost if we have time to eat something or drink alcohol.
>>If my friends give me things, I will be glad and I will pay for the bill when we eat out or drink alcohol.
If someone is co-worker, I will say to her “thank you” and then I will give her candy on white day.
>>If that person is a co-worker, I will say \"thank you\" and give her candy of white day.
Anyway, I didn’t get anything to anybody therefore it’s the most important that I don\'t pay for buying something.
>> Anyway, I didn\'t get anything from anybody therefore it\'s important that I didn\'t spend anything.
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