If someone grabs my bag or purse

2019-10-07 · 첨삭 강사 Vance

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If then, I`m ready to fight with that person. But most important thing is preventing that situation. I will keep my purse in my deepest pocket or I will take hip sack that is attacted my body tightly.

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If then, I`m ready to fight with that person.
>>CORRECT

But most important thing is preventing that situation.
>>But the most important thing is to prevent that situation.

I will keep my purse in my deepest pocket or I will take hip sack that is attacted my body tightly.
>>I will keep my purse in my deepest pocket or I will take hip sack and attach it to my body tightly.

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