If someone offered to tell you your future, would you accept it?
학생이 쓴 원문
If someone offered to tell me about my future, I would not accept it.
I think my future follows what I did and will do.
It can always be changed depending on my act.
It will be useless that someone offered to tell me about my future.
So, I wouldn\'t accept it if someone offered to tell me about my future.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
I completely agree with you.
You have expressed yourself very well.
Thank you for sharing your ideas.
You are really capable of deep thoughts.
Keep it up!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
If someone offered to tell me about my future, I would not accept it.
>> If someone offers to tell me about my future, I would not accept it.
I think my future follows what I did and will do.
>> I think my future would follow what I did and what I will do.
It can always be changed depending on my act.
It can always be changed depending on my act.
>> It can always be changed depending on my actions.
It will be useless that someone offered to tell me about my future.
It will be useless that someone offered to tell me about my future.
>> It will be useless for someone to tell me about my future.
So, I wouldn\'t accept it if someone offered to tell me about my future.
So, I wouldn\'t accept it if someone offered to tell me about my future.
>> Correct
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