If someone tells his/her problem that causes him/her too much stress, how do you deal with it
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Someone has a too much stress, I will suggest some tips. First of all, don\'t drink too much and don\'t eat too much, it will regret later. Instead, take a warm bath with listen to the music and watch a comedy movie to blow stree out. Finally go to bed early.
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Dear [이름],
That was fast! Thanks for doing your homework!:)
-Rachel
Someone has a too much stress, I will suggest some tips.
>> If someone has too much stress, I will suggest some helpful tips.
First of all, don\'t drink too much and don\'t eat too much, it will regret later.
>> First of all, don\'t drink too much and don\'t eat too much, or you will regret later.
Instead, take a warm bath with listen to the music and watch a comedy movie to blow stree out. Finally go to bed early.
>> Instead, take a warm bath while listening to the music and watch a comedy movie to blow the stress out. Finally go to bed early.
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