If something is annoying you, what do you usually do?
학생이 쓴 원문
I usually listen to music. Especially, I listen rock musics. it\'s because its music is so powerful and fast, so I feel better than before. Second, I sometimes shopping with my sisters and friends. It is to calm down anger with the desire for consumption. I know excessive shopping is not good, but I think proper shopping is a good hobby.
강사 첨삭
Hello Cindy!
I appreciate your effort in doing your homework. Keep on answering the questions and check the spelling too. See you in class! ^^
~T. Maine
>>Correct.
Especially, I listen rock musics.
>>I especially listen to rock music.
it\'s because its music is so powerful and fast, so I feel better than before.
>>It\'s because its music is so powerful and fast, so I feel better than before.
Second, I sometimes shopping with my sisters and friends.
>>Second, I sometimes go shopping with my sisters and friends.
It is to calm down anger with the desire for consumption.
>>It is to calm down my anger with the desire for consumption.
I know excessive shopping is not good, but I think proper shopping is a good hobby.
>>Correct.
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