If the weather is perfect outside, what activities would you like to do?
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~~Teacher Kate
1. I like to going to the Han river.
>>CORRECT!
2. my friends and I are delivering the chicken, pizza, tteokbokki, beer, etc...
>>My friends and I have chicken, pizza, tteokbokki, beer, etc. delivered to us.
3. we are eating that food and talking about them on the mat.
>>While we\'re eating food, we talk to each other and sit on the mat.
4. Spreading on the mat culture is very unique korea culture.
>>Picnics are a unique part of Korean culture.
5. so, most people enjoy going to the Han river.
>>CORRECT!
6. There are always many people into the Han river that a tourist attraction.
>>There are always many people by the Han river which makes it a tourist attraction.
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