If there is no competition customer can not get good quality product with low price.
학생이 쓴 원문
> Do you think competition is a good thing?
Yes. I think that competition is needed for all economy activities.
For example if there is no competition between the company, the price of product is decided by company\'s own mind. If they want to get a high price they can adjust price easily.
Moreover if there is no competition between the company, the quality of product could be worse because the maker of product always thinks profit of their company first not customers. As a result customer can not get good quality product with low price.
강사 첨삭
Hello Sir JY. I do agree, competition is indeed necessary for the improvement and development of products or services.
- T. Beth
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Yes. I think that competition is needed for all economy activities.>>> OR: Yes, I think that competition is needed for all economic activities.
For example if there is no competition between the company, the price of product is decided by company\'s own mind.
>>> OR: For example, if there is no competition between companies, the price of the product would be imposed by the companies themselves.
If they want to get a high price they can adjust price easily.
>>> OR: If they want to sell their products on an expensive price, they can easily do that.
Moreover if there is no competition between the company, the quality of product could be worse because the maker of product always thinks profit of their company first not customers.
Moreover if there is no competition between the company, the quality of product could be worse because the maker of product always thinks profit of their company first not customers.
>>> correct
>>> OR: Moreover, if there is no competition between companies, the quality of the product could be worse because the makers would only think of the profit of their company first not the customers.
As a result customer can not get good quality product with low price.
>>> As a result, the customer cannot get good quality product with a low price.
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