If there's a place where you want to get away, where is it? Why?

2016-08-09 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Whether it’s because you want to experience more, find it more convenient, or want to know yourself better through your own Eat, Pray, Love journey, we travel alone for many reasons. As for myself, it’s usually because I either want to immerse myself in a place without the comfort of having a friend to fall back on, or I simply want to get away and be alone for a while. This also means that the ideal places for solo travel will have to either: Have really friendly people so you can make friends easily and get to know a place through local knowledge; Be away from crowds but yet safe enough for you to relax without worrying too much. Big cities will be removed from my list. I prefer to travel to a remote location, so that I can escape from the hustle and bustle of big cities. The place should be quite and tranquil. Local people will be living a slow life, so I can learn something from them. We sometimes just move forward, following others without knowing where we are heading to.

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Good evening Sir [이름]! Happy Tuesday! How\'s the weather in your city today?It is raining here in my hometown. You are right. Traveling alone is also important. We can think about a lot of things and relax as well. It is good to go to other places alone at times. We should find time to relax in order for get rid of stress. Have a good day. Teacher Nina   Whether it’s because you want to experience more, find it more convenient, or want to know yourself better through your own Eat, Pray, Love journey, we travel alone for many reasons. >> correct As for myself, it’s usually because I either want to immerse myself in a place without the comfort of having a friend to fall back on, or I simply want to get away and be alone for a while. >> As for myself, it’s usually the case because I either want to immerse myself in a place without the comfort of having a friend to fall back on, or I simply want to get away and be alone for a while. This also means that the ideal places for solo travel will have to either: Have really friendly people so you can make friends easily and get to know a place through local knowledge; Be away from crowds but yet safe enough for you to relax without worrying too much. Big cities will be removed from my list. >> correct  Big cities will be removed from my list. >> correct I prefer to travel to a remote location, so that I can escape from the hustle and bustle of big cities. >> correct The place should be quite and tranquil. >> correct Local people will be living a slow life, so I can learn something from them. >> correct We sometimes just move forward, following others without knowing where we are heading to. >> correct

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