If there were no rules in your life, for one day, and you could be outrageous, what would you do?
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First of all, I want you to explain in more detail about what the question means.
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I will answer it as I understand.
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If there were no rules in my life, I will go to the North Korea and try to make one country with my country.
>> If there were no rules in my life, I will go to the North Korea and try unite Korea.
I dreamed that I went to the North Korea took robot and then attacked them for reunion our country.
>> I dreamed that I went to the North Korea, took a robot and then attacked them to be able to reunite with the South.
Because my hometown is located in North Korea very closely.
>> My hometown is located very closely to North Korea.
I have been educated that North Korea was only one our main enemy, so we considered people in the North as the one needed to be killed.
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Our government and many countries in the world tried to make a good relationship with North Korea and have wanted to solve the problem with summit or conversation between both countries since our regime changed.
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We hope that there will be peace all over the globe based on Korea reunion.
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