If there were no rules in your life, for one day, and you could be outrageous, what would you do?

2020-01-03 · 첨삭 강사 Avery

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First of all, I want you to explain in more detail about what the question means. I will answer it as I understand. If there were no rules in my life, I will go to the North Korea and try to make one country with my country. I dreamed that I went to the North Korea took robot and then attacked them for reunion our country. Because my hometown is located in North Korea very closely. I have been educated that North Korea was only one our main enemy, so we considered people in the North as the one needed to be killed. Our government and many countries in the world tried to make a good relationship with North Korea and have wanted to solve the problem with summit or conversation between both countries since our regime changed. We hope that there will be peace all over the globe based on Korea reunion.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Mr. [이름]! I think your understood my questions well. Thanks for your idea. Let\'s discuss it more in class. See you! ^_^

~T.Avery

First of all, I want you to explain in more detail about what the question means.

>> CORRECT

I will answer it as I understand.

>> CORRECT

If there were no rules in my life, I will go to the North Korea and try to make one country with my country.

>> If there were no rules in my life, I will go to the North Korea and try unite Korea.

I dreamed that I went to the North Korea took robot and then attacked them for reunion our country.

>> I dreamed that I went to the North Korea, took a robot and then attacked them to be able to reunite with the South.

Because my hometown is located in North Korea very closely.

>> My hometown is located very closely to North Korea.

I have been educated that North Korea was only one our main enemy, so we considered people in the North as the one needed to be killed.

>> CORRECT

Our government and many countries in the world tried to make a good relationship with North Korea and have wanted to solve the problem with summit or conversation between both countries since our regime changed.

>> CORRECT

We hope that there will be peace all over the globe based on Korea reunion.

>> CORRECT

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