If there will be one thing to change in my life,

2014-09-03 · 첨삭 강사 Myra

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If there will be one thing to change in my life, I would like to change my personality to more sociable person and focus on happiness in my life, it is because I have been short of sociability until now and I have been regarding personal honor and success very highly

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If there will be one thing to change in my life,
>>CORRECT
I would like to change my personality to more sociable person and focus on happiness in my life,
>>I would like to change my personality to a more sociable person and to focus on happiness in my life.
it is because I have been short of sociability until now and I have been regarding personal honor and success very highly
>>It is because I am not sociable and until now, I have been regarding personal honor and success very highly.

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