If time travel were possible, which period of world history would you like to return to?

2020-07-27 · 첨삭 강사 Jedah

학생이 쓴 원문

I would like to return to the Middle Age. If I back to that age, I want to ride a horse and live in a castle like a princess. That area doesn\'t have any fine dust and may have a blue sky and green sea.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Thanks for devoting a little of your time with your homework. I really appreciate it! ^ ^
WOW! I would definitely want to go back to that era too. Sounds really exciting and fun living in a castle!  ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah

I would like to return to the Middle Age. 
>>I would like to return to the Middle Ages.
If I back to that age, I want to ride a horse and live in a castle like a princess. 
>>If I could go back to that time, I would ride horses and live in a castle like a princess.
That area doesn\'t have any fine dust and may have a blue sky and green sea.
>>That era probably didn\'t have any fine dust and had clear blue skies and green seas.

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