If tomorrow is the end of the world, what will you do today?
학생이 쓴 원문
If tomorrow is the end of the world, I will be with my family at home. I think being with my family is the best thinking. But I thought another thinking, I think eating the last dinner is the best thinking with my family. I think my family is the more precious.
강사 첨삭
Good morning Jay!
Thank you for sharing your thought about the homework. We\'ll I have noticed that you \"overused\" the word THINK here. please use some synonyms that will not make your sentence look redundant.
See you later. Have a great day!
T. Aki~
If tomorrow is the end of the world, I will be with my family at home.
>>> CORRECT!
I think being with my family is the best thinking.
>>> I think being with my family is the best decision that I can do.
But I thought another thinking, I think eating the last dinner is the best thinking with my family.
>>> But I am also considering one thing like having last dinner with them.
I think my family is the more precious.
>>> CORRECT!
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