If we sell the construction site
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My senior and her husband would be upset if we sold our construction site. Since they will have to use common road and my senior\'s husband has a plan to build our house for earning money, he will be disappointed at our decision to sell the site. In addition, they will be embarrassed because they don\'t borrow some money for building their house from me.
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Hi, Gi [이름]!
I agree! Maybe selling your construction site might cause more conflict between your husband and your senior\'s husband, but if the situation is already unfixable, then I think it is also best to sell it for your peace of mind rather than continue living there while feeling uncomfortable with your neighbor.
- T. Caitlyn
My senior and her husband would be upset if we sold our construction site.
>> CORRECT
Since they will have to use common road and my senior\'s husband has a plan to build our house for earning money, he will be disappointed at our decision to sell the site.
>> Since they will have to use the common road, and my senior’s husband plans to build our house to generate income, he will be disappointed with our decision to sell the site.
In addition, they will be embarrassed because they don\'t borrow some money for building their house from me.
>> In addition, they will be embarrassed because they couldn\'t borrow any money from me to build their house.
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