If you are buying an expensive item, do you compare prices at several shops and the Internet? Answer
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When I bought an expensive item, I have compared prices at several shops and the internet. I have a reason why I compare prices at several store.
I have to get stuffs for reasonable price. Sometimes it is quite tiresome to me. But I was satisfied, when I get the stuff for reasonable price. It feels like that I’m digging for expensive treasures on mines.
강사 첨삭
Hi Amy!
Thank you fro the effort today.
Please be guided by the proper use of pronouns in your sentences.
This will help you avoid repeating the same expressions.
Just ask me if you have any questions.
Great job!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
When I bought an expensive item, I have compared prices at several shops and the internet.
>> When I buy an expensive item, I compare prices at several shops and with the use of the Internet.
I have a reason why I compare prices at several store.
>> I have a reason why I do this.
I have to get stuffs for reasonable price.
I have to get stuffs for reasonable price.
>> I have to get stuff for a reasonable price.
Sometimes it is quite tiresome to me.
>> Sometimes, it is quite tiresome for me.
But I was satisfied, when I get the stuff for reasonable price.
>> However, I feel satisfied when I get something for a reasonable price.
It feels like that I’m digging for expensive treasures on mines.
>> It feels like I’m digging for expensive treasure in a mine.
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