If you are given a chance to bring back the past, which one would you want to change?
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Hi there, [이름]^^,
I hope that you are feeling better now.
I can say that you are right in not regretting anything in your past.
Let\'s live and enjoy now and strive more for our future, right?^^
Thank you so much for taking time in answering your homework.
I really appreciate it.
I did not regret my life in the past.
>>I don\'t regret my life in the past.
However if i had a chance to bring back the past, I would make my parents happy.
>>However, if I have a chance to bring back the past then I would like to make parents happy.
My family had a financial difficulties when I was young.
>>Correct!
But I just wanted to buy an expensive clothes, electronics anything that my close friends had without any consideration about financial situation of my parents.
>>I just wanted to buy expensive clothes, electronics, and anything that my close friends have for my parents without considering any financial matters.
I am sure that my parents had a lot of difficulties on bring up me and my sister.
>>I am sure that my parents had a lot of difficulties in bringing me up and my sister.
OR:
>> I am sure that my parents experienced a lot of difficulties in raising me and my sister.
I really feel sorry to them for misbehavior at that time.
>>I really feel sorry for them for my misbehaviors during those times.
In retrospect, my parents allowed me to do anything that I waned to do without being mad.
>>In retrospect, my parents allowed me to do anything that I wanted to do without getting mad.
I really want to pay my love back to my parents.
>>I really want to pay back the love that my parents had given me.
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