If you are given a chance to travel a country for free, which country will you go? Why did you choos

2017-06-21 · 첨삭 강사 Lorna

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If you are given a chance to travel a country for free, which country will you go? Why did you choose this country? I would like simply to go to Japan. It is very common and easy to consider of the country. But unfortunately I have never been there for my whole life. First of all, I like to eat Japanese foods rather than the foods that I have experienced in other countries. Some says that we can taste it here without the need to go to Japan. But we don't know what taste is different instead of going there. Another reason is that I would like to see the country just once in a life[이름]e. Actually I don't prefer to go abroad because of jetlag arisen by different [이름]e zone.

강사 첨삭

 Hi there, [이름]^^. How is your Tuesday night going?

I hope everything is just fine.

Thank you for being a responsible student.

I am so happy to have such student like you. 

Here are my corrections to your answer.


~T. Lorna^^


I would like simply to go to Japan.

>> I will just go to Japan.

 It is very common and easy to consider of the country.

>> It is very common and easy to consider this country.

 But unfortunately I have never been there for my whole life.

>> CORRECT!

First of all, I like to eat Japanese foods rather than the foods that I have experienced in other countries.

>> First of all, I would like to eat Japanese food rather than  to eat those food that I ate in other countries. 

Some says that we can taste it here without the need to go to Japan.

>> Some says that we can taste it here without going to Japan.

 But we don\'t know what taste is different instead of going there.

>> But, I think we will know the differences of taste when we go there.

 Another reason is that I would like to see the country just once in a life[이름]e.

>> One reason is that, I would like to see the country even once in my life.

 Actually I don\'t prefer to go abroad because of jetlag arisen by different [이름]e zone.

>> I actually do not like to go abroad because I do not like jetlag.

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