If you are given a chance to travel a country for free, which country will you go? Why did you choos
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I would like simply to go to Japan.
>> I will just go to Japan.
It is very common and easy to consider of the country.
>> It is very common and easy to consider this country.
But unfortunately I have never been there for my whole life.
>> CORRECT!
First of all, I like to eat Japanese foods rather than the foods that I have experienced in other countries.
>> First of all, I would like to eat Japanese food rather than to eat those food that I ate in other countries.
Some says that we can taste it here without the need to go to Japan.
>> Some says that we can taste it here without going to Japan.
But we don\'t know what taste is different instead of going there.
>> But, I think we will know the differences of taste when we go there.
Another reason is that I would like to see the country just once in a life[이름]e.
>> One reason is that, I would like to see the country even once in my life.
Actually I don\'t prefer to go abroad because of jetlag arisen by different [이름]e zone.
>> I actually do not like to go abroad because I do not like jetlag.
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