If you are given the chance to learn another language for FREE. What would it be and why?

2020-03-03 · 첨삭 강사 Jasper

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If you are given the chance to learn another language for FREE. What would it be and why? I want learn franch because I want to eat franch food and macaroon and going to the eiffel tower also I want lived in there!

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Hi [이름]. Once again, I appreciate your efforts in making your homework. Keep it up.

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I want learn franch because I want to eat franch food and macaroon and going to the eiffel tower also I want lived in there!

>> I want to learn French because I want to eat French food and macaroons. I also want to go to the Eiffel tower and I also wish to live in France.

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