If you are given three wishes by a genie, what would they be and why?
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A good day to you Hanse! It’s another day; another day to be blessed and be grateful. Let us be thankful for all the things and people in our lives and smile as we go on through the day. Talk to you later. Ciao!
T. Andi =)
If you are given three wishes by
a genie, what would they be and why?
1. I would like be more get a
money.
>> I would like to get more money.
>> or: I would like to have
more money. (Don’t worry; me too! I would want to have more money. ^_^)
2. I would like be dancer. because I am a terribly bad dancer.
>> I would like to be a better
dancer. I am terribly bad in dancing. (Don’t you worry, I am too is a terrible
dancer.)
3. I would have be nice brain
>> I would like to be smarter/more intelligent/brainier. (I think you are already smart Hanse because, you can play the violin and piano. Learning English might seem difficult right now but, with patience and perseverance you’ll achieve your goals. ^_^ )
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