If you are going to a Halloween party, what costume are you going to wear and why?
학생이 쓴 원문
If I am going to a Halloween party, I will going to make up like Joker.
Because I am a big fan of Batman and also I think Joker is the representative villain of Batman.
It is Holloween party, so I think Joker is more suitable than Batman.
That\'s why I want to make up like Joker if I am going to enjoy a Holloween party.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]:)
That\'s a good costume. I wonder what you\'d look like when you wear it. Thanks :)
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If I am going to a Halloween party, I will going to make up like Joker.
>> If I will go to a Halloween party, I will dress up as \"Joker\".
>> It is because I am a big fan of Batman and I also think that Joker is the main villain of him.
It is Holloween party, so I think Joker is more suitable than Batman.
>> It\'s a Halloween party, so I think the Joker would be more suitable than Batman.
That\'s why I want to make up like Joker if I am going to enjoy a Holloween party.
>> This is why I want to dress up as him in a Halloween party.
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