If you are going to buy a new car, what kind of car would you get? Why?

2015-01-27 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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Hi~ jessie :-) It's very long time to see you. Because I went to my home and recent days, I was too lazy. I saw your comment and reflect on myself. I'll try harder from now on. So Have a nice and happy day! Now talk about our homework..Um.. If i buy a car, I will get the car that was comfortable to drive in. In addition, The design was also wonderful. haha I don't acquire a license yet, I will get a driver's license this winter vacation. It's my goal. XD

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Hello there [이름]! Yeah! You\'re back! Thanks for that. I hope you\'ll also have a happy day! Thanks for sharing your opinion and your plan. I hope you can get your license soon. ^_^ See you later! ~T. Jessie~ Hi~ jessie :-) >> Hi Jessie! :-) It\'s very long time to see you. >> It\'s been a long time since I saw you. Because I went to my home and recent days, I was too lazy. >> Because I went to my home and for the recent days, I was too lazy. I saw your comment and reflect on myself. >> Correct! I\'ll try harder from now on. >> Correct! So Have a nice and happy day! >> So have a nice and happy day! Now talk about our homework.. >> Now let\'s talk about our homework. Um.. If i buy a car, I will get the car that was comfortable to drive in. >> If I will buy a car, I will get the car that is comfortable to drive. In addition, The design was also wonderful. haha >> In addition, the design should also be wonderful. hahaI don\'t acquire a license yet, I will get a driver\'s license this winter vacation. >> I don\'t have a license yet but I will get one this winter vacation. OR>> I didn\'t acquire a license yet  but I will get one this winter vacation. It\'s my goal. XD >> Correct!

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