If you are going to buy a new car, what kind of car would you get? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi~ jessie :-)
It's very long time to see you. Because I went to my home and recent days, I was too lazy. I saw your comment and reflect on myself. I'll try harder from now on. So Have a nice and happy day!
Now talk about our homework..Um.. If i buy a car, I will get the car that was comfortable to drive in. In addition, The design was also wonderful. haha
I don't acquire a license yet, I will get a driver's license this winter vacation. It's my goal. XD
강사 첨삭
Hello there [이름]!
Yeah! You\'re back! Thanks for that.
I hope you\'ll also have a happy day!
Thanks for sharing your opinion and your plan.
I hope you can get your license soon. ^_^
See you later!
~T. Jessie~
Hi~ jessie :-)
>> Hi Jessie! :-)
It\'s very long time to see you.
>> It\'s been a long time since I saw you.
Because I went to my home and recent days, I was too lazy.
>> Because I went to my home and for the recent days, I was too lazy.
I saw your comment and reflect on myself.
>> Correct!
I\'ll try harder from now on.
>> Correct!
So Have a nice and happy day!
>> So have a nice and happy day!
Now talk about our homework..
>> Now let\'s talk about our homework.
Um.. If i buy a car, I will get the car that was comfortable to drive in.
>> If I will buy a car, I will get the car that is comfortable to drive.
In addition, The design was also wonderful. haha
>> In addition, the design should also be wonderful. hahaI don\'t acquire a license yet, I will get a driver\'s license this winter vacation.
>> I don\'t have a license yet but I will get one this winter vacation.
OR>> I didn\'t acquire a license yet but I will get one this winter vacation.
It\'s my goal. XD
>> Correct!
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