If you are going to make a movie, what story would you like to have?

2021-04-09 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I never thought it before. well if i am going to make a movie, I want to make a story about sports. Actually it is not movie which i want to make. it\'s animation. I saw animation about baseball for 6 years ago. It was very fun. but It just only made one season. even if it is not finished story. I don\'t know why they don\'t make it more. I think probably it is not sold at all that season. so It is not deserved to make animation. because the original of story is comic book. the book is one of the populate book in japan. so If i have a chance to make animation, I want to make animation about the second season of that story.

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Hi [이름]! That\'s a very clever movie you got there. It\'s fascinating how our imagination runs wild when we get inspired. ^^^

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I never thought it before.

>>I have never thought about it before.

well if i am going to make a movie, I want to make a story about sports.

>>Well, if I am going to make a movie, I want to make a story about sports.

Actually it is not movie which i want to make. it\'s animation.

>>Actually it is not movie which I want to make but an animation series.

I saw animation about baseball for 6 years ago.

>>I saw an animation about baseball 6 years ago.

It was very fun. but It just only made one season.

>>It was very fun but it only had one season.

even if it is not finished story.

>> The story was not finished.

I don\'t know why they don\'t make it more.

>> I don\'t know why they don\'t make it anymore.

I think probably it is not sold at all that season.

>> I probably think that it was not sold out at all that season.

so It is not deserved to make animation.

>>That\'s why it did not deserve to be an animation.

because the original of story is comic book. the book is one of the populate book in japan.

>> Originally, the story was from a famous comic book in Japan.

so If i have a chance to make animation, I want to make animation about the second season of that story.

>>So if I had the chance to make an animation, I would make the second season of that story.

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