If you are going to make a song, what would it be about and who are you dedicating it to?
학생이 쓴 원문
If I make a song, I want to make a song for my parents. My parents taught me responsibility and showed me what a harmonious family is like. When I hear sad stories about other people\'s families, I really feel that my family is happy and harmonious. So I want to make a song to thank my parents and play it for them.
강사 첨삭
Hi Yeong! ^^
That\'s a great choice and very sweet of you to think of. Our parents have sacrificed a lot for us. This can really uplift your and other people\'s spirits. :)
>> If I will make a song, I want to dedicate it to my parents.
My parents taught me responsibility and showed me what a harmonious family is like.
>> CORRECT
When I hear sad stories about other people\'s families, I really feel that my family is happy and harmonious.
>> CORRECT
So I want to make a song to thank my parents and play it for them.
>>CORRECT
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