If you are going to make an art masterpiece what would it be? Answer in a few sentences.
학생이 쓴 원문
My artwork would be a big snowball. The inside of it includes my dream place i hope to visit or a the happiest moment i had.
강사 첨삭
Good morning, Judy!
What a great idea for an art work! We human beings have the longing to look back and freeze the moments of our happy memories. Like a snowball, it is a small ball containing a picture of one scenario. So, you can always remember that time when you take a look at it.
Thank you very much for your time to answer the homework question! I will tell mine in class later.^^
See you then!
-T. Donna~
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The inside of it includes my dream place i hope to visit or a the happiest moment i had.
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Or: The inside of it includes my dream place which I hope to visit or a the happiest moment that I had.
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