If you are not able to forgive others, you carry the burden on you and hurt yourself. Do you agree?

2021-12-21 · 첨삭 강사 Debbie

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If you are not able to forgive others, you carry the burden on you and hurt yourself. Do you agree? I haven\'t experienced something that I should forgive someone. If I did, it must not have been a big deal. But, I believe that surely there are cases that someone cannot forgive others. Forgiving someone is not easy. So we cannot let them forgive others easily.

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Hi, Ian! Thank you for doing your homework. However, you were not able to answer the question accordingly. Please read the question carefully next time. 

- Debbie

If you are not able to forgive others, you carry the burden on you and hurt yourself. Do you agree?

I haven\'t experienced something that I should forgive someone.
>> I haven\'t experienced someone hurting me.

If I did, it must not have been a big deal.
>> If I had, it must not have been a big deal.

But, I believe that surely there are cases that someone cannot forgive others.
>> However, I believe there are cases someone cannot forgive others.

Forgiving someone is not easy. 
>> This is a good sentence.

So we cannot let them forgive others easily.
>> Therefore, we cannot let them forgive others easily.

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