If you are paid for your overtime, would you prefer to be paid in money or in \"time off.\"
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I want to earn lots of money, if I have a lot of money, I can do anything whatever I want. Furthermore, I can take more money if I do overtime working, it is even better.
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I want to earn lots of money, if I have a lot of money, I can do anything whatever I want.
>>OR: I want to earn lots of money. If I have a lot of money, I can do whatever I want.
Furthermore, I can take more money if I do overtime working, it is even better.
>> Furthermore, if I can make more money by doing overtime work, it is even better.
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