If you are to advice something to President Trump, what would that be and why?

2020-07-08 · 첨삭 강사 Jasper

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It\'s a very difficult questions. If I have a chance to talk to Trump, I will ask to him. \"You have a power and you are rich, will you cooperate with WHO to make a vaccine for COVID-19?\" USA is a big country and center of the world, he can consider all people\'s health.

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Hi [이름]~ Thank you for answering your homework. 

Here are your corrections:

It\'s a very difficult questions. 
>> Those are very difficult questions.

If I have a chance to talk to Trump, I will ask to him. \"You have a power and you are rich, will you cooperate with WHO to make a vaccine for COVID-19?\" 
>> If I have a chance to talk to Trump, I will ask him, \"You have the power and resources, why won\'t you cooperate with W.H.O in making the vaccine for COVID-19?\".

USA is a big country and center of the world, 
>> USA is a big country and is considered as the central country of the world. 

he can consider all people\'s health.
>> He should consider other people\'s well being.

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