If you are to be a super hero and will be given one power, what could it be and why?

2016-07-20 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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I wish I could have ability to learn something fast and perfectly. I’d like to be a professional golfer, tennis player, and skier. I want to play drum, piano and sing a song like an excellent musician. I wish I could paint like van Gogh. How wonderful would it be if I can speak various foreign languages: Chinese, French, Japanese, Spanish, German, French and English? If I can have thorough knowledge about history and politics, I can have deliver a lecture to students. What if I have skills to interact with people greatly? People will gather around me all the time. Without me, a party will be boring. In reality, it takes too long for us to master something like playing sports or musical instruments. Even to learn something academically, it takes our whole life. A learning skill is definitely of crucial importance in our society. Let’s suppose that you can read through and absorb all the contents of the book within a few minutes, while others takes a whole day or even longer.

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Hello there Sir [이름]! Yahoo! It\'s hump day again. ^^ We do have a lot of wishes that hopefully we could attain those in the future. I guess we have it someday by being patient and determined to learn. That\'s why I am so thakful that you are my student. Whenever we have our class, it feels great. You are fun to talk to. ^.^ We should be thankful for the skills that we have now and improve it more. See you! Take care. Teacher Nina   I wish I could have ability to learn something fast and perfectly. >> Better: I wish I could have the ability to learn something fast and perfectly. I’d like to be a professional golfer, tennis player, and skier. >> correct I want to play drum, piano and sing a song like an excellent musician. >> Better: I want to play drums, piano and sing a song like an excellent musician. I wish I could paint like van Gogh. >> correct >> OR: I wish I could paint like Van Gogh. How wonderful would it be if I can speak various foreign languages: Chinese, French, Japanese, Spanish, German, French and English? >> correct If I can have thorough knowledge about history and politics, I can have deliver a lecture to students. >> correct What if I have skills to interact with people greatly? >> correct People will gather around me all the time. >> correct Without me, a party will be boring. >> correct In reality, it takes too long for us to master something like playing sports or musical instruments. >> correct Even to learn something academically, it takes our whole life. >> correct A learning skill is definitely of crucial importance in our society. >> correct Let’s suppose that you can read through and absorb all the contents of the book within a few minutes, while others takes a whole day or even longer. >> correct

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