If you are to start a business, what would that be and why?
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If i had a business, I want to stock.
I want to make a lot of money with stocks.^^
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Hi [이름] ! ^^
The best option is always to make or sell a product or service that you know about and love. If you’re looking for someplace to score a short-term hit just for the sake of reaping a financial gain, that’s fine – get in; make your money; and get out. But if you’re looking to start a business for the long haul that suits your temperament, your strengths and the lifestyle you want, you must choose a business that you love.
If i had a business, I want to stock.
>> If I had a business, I want it to be about the stock market.
I want to make a lot of money with stocks.
>> CORRECT
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