If you are very busy at school, do you have ways to balance your life?
학생이 쓴 원문
Keep mind control it have ways to balance you life at school
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
I have seen you exert great efforts.
I hope you continue to keep that balance between your school and personal life.
It will make you a more diligent student in the end.
~~ Teacher Sharon
Keep mind control it have ways to balance you life at school
>> Always manage to control your thoughts and you can find ways to balance your personal and your school life.
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